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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Firstly, Oliver Wood-- *swoon*

And I love Ronaís romantic reluctance, and general stubbornness. All of their secrets and lies are written excellently--sometimes youíll have told us the truth, and Iíll still find myself believing one of their fibs for a moment, before I figure it out.

Also, I LOVE how you worked in bits from the plot of Prisoner of Azkaban--when Oliver was angry at McGonnagal for not letting Harry have the Firebolt. Brilliant! Itís so interesting reading something that takes place during that Harry Potter time period from a completely different point of view. And really insightful, when you think about it--shows how, apart from the key players in the series, everyoneís lives mostly just went on as usual up until Book 5.

Well done! Loving it : D

P.S. Also, my roommate adores K-dramas, and Iíve watched a few of them when sheís had them on. I thought they were really quite good, and though I havenít had more time to watch them, I was excited to see you mention it. Not that itís relevant. Just a sort of fun fact.

Author's Response: I like to imagine everything in this fic as one big web, and everyone's caught in it, twitchy-legged and moaning for water :'D It was never supposed to be about twisty lies, but they sort of piled up naturally, which is exactly what happens in real life.

I didn't pay much attention to canon to be honest, but I tried to put a bit of the books in where I could - at least Quidditch side. There was a whole chapter devoted to Quidditch, after all, so I'd make the most of that.

I grew up on Asian dramas, so it's sort of ingrained into my life. The school-age rom-coms are so cuuute c: I love Coffee Prince, and Nodame Cantabile (Japanese).


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