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Review:AlexFan says:
There's such an air of mystery around this entire chapter. It was actually kind of spooky but I love where the story is going so far. The ending was a good cliffhanger because it left the reader wanting to read more and to see what was going on.

Your grammar and punctuation was good and I've got this sense that Persephone is a bit of a stubborn person who may or may not be hotheaded.

Your flow was great and there were no choppy or awkward sentences either so great job on that!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!

This was my first chapter of fanfiction EVER, and so I spent a lot of time trying to make it flow nicely. I wanted Persephone to be a really independent sort of character, despite her age and her time period. Hopefully in later chapters (that I have yet to post!), her character will round out.

Thank you again for your lovely review! :)

~UnluckyStar57


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