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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the Blue vs. Bronze Review Battle! :)

So, I thought that this story was pretty funny. You've got some really great pranks in there, especially the underwear one! I think you've done a pretty great job with getting the audience's attention when it comes to silly April Fool's pranks!!

However, I wish that I could've seen a few more of the pranks that Lily played on James. He seemed to get the most air time as far as pranks go, and I'm sure that hers were all just as cleverly executed, if not more so, than his were. But that might make your story too long, and you might not want that!

Therefore, I will conclude that your story is awesome, and I love how it isn't at all about a relationboat. Totally awesome. :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: I thought I'd have a hard time coming up with pranks but funnily enough they just kind of pored out of me.

I was thinking of going into more detail about the pranks that Lily pulled but the focus of my character for the challenge that this was entered was James so I thought that if I went into too much detail about Lily it would seem like it was about her.

I'm so happy that you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!


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