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Review:AlexFan says:
Woah, your main character is scary. I would say she's a psychopath but she doesn't fit the description of one so I'll just think of her as crazy or mentally unstable.

I'm curious as to what was going on at the beginning because obviously Lila is hunting someone down but has she turned into a werewolf or something because it sure sounds like that.

I feel bad for the little girl that she nearly broke the arm of, she must be terrified.

I like the ending though even if the teacher is smoking (although that isn't much of a big deal for me). There doesn't seem to be any grammar or punctuation errors so great job on that and Lila has already started to develop as a character.

Great job!

P. S. you're my 700th review so I'm excited!

Author's Response: I am honoured to be your 700th review omg! *looks at own woeful review count*

Lila is definitely mentally and emotionally unstable. She did have a bad childhood and therefore has trust issues, but she is also just an unpleasant person.

She doesn't turn into a werewolf at the start, but she is part werewolf so I guess those were her more canine instincts coming through, the fact that she enjoys causing fear, pain etc.

Thank you for reviewing!


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