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Review:potterfan310 says:
Your summary was really unusual and I was so intigued that I had to read it, I'm so glad I did :)

I LOVE Coral's name, it's so unusual and unique. I names that no one else is likely to have!!

Until I read that Coral was 16, I really thought that she was in her early twenties/middle aged or something.

I realy like your characterisation of her, she seems like a fun person as well as being sorta of a mother hen because of giving advice and that she loves to help people.
I really like this so far. I think this really original and I've never read anything like it.

I'm curious as to why James calls her Coco?
I like the reasons behind their nicknames, espcially Coral's being Rocky!! :D

I'm in agreement with Rose, seeing Mcgonagall drunk would be way funnier than Slughorn.

It's nice to see Albus in a different light, okay so he's the golden boy but now he's turning bad and it's just really unexpected. I like it!!

"Hold up. They want me to help HARRY POTTER?" - Haha, love that she thinks she has to help Harry.

For some reason I think that Albus' change might have to do with drugs. The mood swings, violence, totally different personality. I don't know why but I have a feeling.

I can't wait to read the next chaprer and see more of Coral's personality and how their relationship develop as a counselour/patient and of thet become a couple.

Definitely adding it to my favs!!!

Soph xx

Author's Response: Thank you for such a long lovely review! :D

I totally agree with you - I too, find Coral a really pretty name! And i got another reviwer confused about Coral's age. Maybe i should change that in the summary..
Thank you so much! I tried to keep the idea as original as possible and i didn't see any other story on hpff with this ides - so i thought i should try it out! I'm so glad you liked it :)

Well, Coco is one of her other nicknames which James has taken a liking to. So. I too wanted to portray Albus differently. In very few stories he's been portrayed as a bad boy so once again why not try a new idea! As for Albus's problem - you'll just have to wait and see ;)

Thank you so much for reading! I'll try to update as soon as i can :) x

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