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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Another great chapter. And wow, I really did not see that ending coming.

And, in continuance, I might be wrong--I had to puzzle them out--but I think you have some autocorrect issues again:

Each time it’s meant to say “eyes” it says “puppies”
-girl = bunny rabbit
-kiss = hug
-face = purse
-voice = underwear
-hamsters = lips
-"respect personal boundaries" = er...snogging? I’m not really sure what that one’s meant to be
-garden shed = I’m really not sure what that signified, either, actually

No one else in reviews seems to have noticed anything amiss? I don’t know if it wasn’t there before or if I’m just out of the loop on a prank, but I thought--if you were to want to edit it--it would make it easier to have a list than to have to comb through it yourself.

Still an excellent story! Just with some rather strange noun substitutions.

Author's Response: I responded to your other review too; bahaha, I wonder how much of the effect is changed with uh, respecting personal boundaries. The latest chapter of etc. has some rocking changes I put on the tumblr - "Civil bunny rabbits and frogs, apples of their mothers' puppies", oh dear that sentence.

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