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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! Second review for you today! :)

So, the action is definitely taking off as Lily discovers that she MOST CERTAINLY is pregnant. I hope, for her sake, that Jake will be an understanding boyfriend!

A few problems: You seem to have mixed up a few homophones, such as "they're/their/there." Just be a little more careful about that!
And also, some words like "hugged" and "scarred" are spelled with a double consonant before the suffix. Those were the most obvious ones, but they can be cleared up quite quickly!

Nice chapter!


Author's Response: Hello again :)

It's all action from here on in :D

I have problems with them but now I've sorted it out by saying them outloud to decide which one it is to use. I'll make sure to double check when I edit!

Thank you once again!!
Soph x

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