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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

Often when I read a story with such short chapters I tell the author to 'add more description' to try and lengthen out the chapter or even to 'add more inner thoughts.' With this story, however, I am actually enjoying the short length! You manage to add a lot of feeling and emotion to Lydia's character, and a lot of personality, too, in such a short space of time. I think that is a great skill to have!

I liked this chapter - though it made me reminisce about Christmas and the nice, long holidays which was not good. I love these strange little encounters which Lydia and James keep on having, and I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship develops.

Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it! I am so glad you like Lydia and James, it gets better as we go! :)

Thanks again! :)

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