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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey! I'm back!

I have to say, I am really enjoying this story so far! Your characterization of Dom is wonderful, and it still has that air of mystery and suspense, leaving me hooked and wondering what is going to happen next.

I love the way you have described and shown all the emotions and different ideas Dom is feeling after discovering she is a werewolf. Also, her internal conflict is great. On one hand, she wants to be able to get past the fact that she has turned into a 'monster' and get back to her family and friends but on the other hand, she can't accept the fact that she is now a werewolf, and is constantly brooding on it. In other words, her feelings are very realistic (even though they concern turning into a wolf every month) making her character so much more believable.

That flashback was so cute! Often in Victoire/Teddy/Dom stories the relationship between Dom and Victoire is fraught with tension at best, so it was nice to see that they seem to have a such a great relationship in this story. And I'm glad that the first thing Dom considered was how her relationship with her sister would be affected if she and Teddy were together. It's great that Victoire is happy for her, and happy with Ian - I admit, I'm curious to know more about him now!

I'm not quite sure what to make of Dom's boss. At first she seemed kinda nice but then she suddenly became very sharp and a little scary. And all she seems to care about is the article, rather than Dom's condition! And that's after saying that the prophet is aiming to help improve werewolf-wizard relations, too! Strange woman, if I ever saw one!

Oooh, that was a nice little cliffhanger at the end! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter now. I wonder whether Teddy isn't smiling because of what Dom said to him the last time they were together, or whether it's something else...

Either way, I can't wait to find out! Nice job.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the extreme delay in responding!

I am pleased that you're enjoying the story so far and you like the whole suspense, as well as Dom's character. There's a lot more that's going to happen further so I hope you continue to like this!

I was very worried about overdoing the whole emotions/internal conflict thing, but it's great to know you liked it. It's a relief that you found her feelings realistic and her character believable.

I didn't want to have any tension between Vic and Dom, but I didn't want to separate Teddy/Dom, so I got around it by the "flashback" hehe. We'll see more of Ian soon too =)

Dom's boss is weird yeah. Again, more will be learnt about her in the future chapters. She may be good, or she may be bad, you can't tell yet ;) Strange is the perfect way to describe her.

Well, the next chapter's title should give you a hint as to why Teddy isn't smiling, but I won't say more.

Thanks again for your kind words!


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