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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

Okay, so this was definitely another filler chapter but I enjoyed it nevertheless - short and sweet!

There were many elements to this chapter that I enjoyed. I think the thing I like most about this story is how much of a disaster being manager of Puddlemere United is turning out to be, and how Oliver's life really just keeps going downhill. I think we saw a lot of this downhillness in this chapter!

I really enjoyed Oliver's interactions with all the people he talked to in the Ministry, especially Penny and Percy. Actually, especially Percy, because he's always been one of my favourite characters, and you made him perfectly pompous and boring! I loved how when Oliver talked about the Tornadoes, Percy instantly assumed he was talking about the weather. That was a nice touch.

This bit: “Thursday-,” she began.

“Brilliant,” I clapped my hands together

“- the twenty sixth of March,” she finished' was also very nicely done, and made me laugh. Things really aren't going very well for Oliver, are they? And to top it all off, he gets back from the Ministry and finds out that Pippa has been suspended from playing Quidditch! What next?

This was a fun chapter! I'm sorry that this review wasn't particularly helpful!


Author's Response: Hello!

I know, I'm dreadful for writing filler chapters, to be honest I'm worried this is going to turn into one gigantic filler!

Olivers life really is falling asunder isn't it? And I think for now Oliver is on on continuous downward spiral, but who knows, things might get better (then worse, then better again, then completely rubbish, mildly better and so on!)

I loved Percy, he was so fun to write! Completely awkward, rather pompous and always boring, and I just had to include his little speech about tornadoes, only Percy would take that literally!

I love that receptionist, you know, she may just make another appearance. I get way to attached to characters, but ah well!

Yes, Pippa was suspended, poor girl, and I guess poor Oliver as well!

Thank you so much for the review! I really do enjoy them :D

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