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Review:Flavia says:
I'm confused...Vivian's nana sells wizarding books in a muggle bookstore? Can she do that?

Oh, and I worked out why the dialogue doesn't seem to flow. You keep starting a new paragraph directly after closing the speech, but it should all be part of the same paragraph, same sentence actually. For example, "sounds like someone was slipped a love potion," Teddy spoke, nudging James again. See how it's all in the same paragraph? If you break it up, then it becomes stilted and difficult to read. You might want to fix that.

It will be interesting to see how James goes about finding out which world Vivian is from :)

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