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Review:Flavia says:
I like this concept, it has the makings a really interesting story. Vivian seems like a very sweet character, I can't wait to read more of her.

There are times when your sentence structure doesn't flow very well, particularly in the dialogue, and there's a few little grammar errors here and there. Keep working at it and I'm sure it will improve.

Also, it's such a little thing, but according to canon, James doesn't have green eyes. In the DH epilogue it says that Albus was the only one on Harry's kids to inherit his and his mother's green eyes.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

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