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Review:greenbeanjean says:
"Besides, when the well-being of this school hinges on my sexuality, I think there's a bigger problem to address!"

Scorpius is my new favorite.

But seriously I thought the sex scene was great in the last chapter. It was not too cheesy and it was also totally romantic. And I think you're right to include the pennyroyal considerations here. As much as we wish sex came without risks, it doesn't (not saying premarital sex is bad and that people shouldn't do it, just that minimizing the risks makes the whole experience so much better). Anyway loved everything about this chapter. Love that Clemence kissed Albus in front of the school. Hopefully this makes it more likely she'll let her guard down since she's already dealing w/ the public fall out of a relationship w/ him.

Author's Response: HE SAID IT.

I consider myself lucky that I grew up well-educated about sex. The topic (and related stuff, like virginity) has never been a big deal for me like a lot of TV shows seem to make it, and I've always been comfortable with discussing it, and this chapter was one of the rare occasions I could bring up the worries that don't get discussed as much, like the whole paragraph where Clemence wonders where she might get the potion. Things like what Helen does are common, even though she knows how stupid she's being, and she's always wondering if one time is worth a month of worrying, or worse.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Lots of fun stuff coming up c:

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