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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
A nice continuation on from the last chapter as it flowed rather nice over into it. The pace and flow of the story is is good as it doesn't rush the reader too much but allows them to go along at a nice pace so they can understand and take in everything that is going on in the plot. It's written rather well explaining what is going on and how people react to certain events which is a key thing to convey when story telling.

I love your use of a cliffhanger as it they are very good for trying to hook the audience in just so they can find out what is happening next. And they aren't always the easiest of things to fit in to a story so well done on that! Again there was a few grammar error but other than that it's looking good so far.

~Hallows!

Author's Response: Hello again :)

Thank you, I'm glad it flows okay and that you think it was written well.

I think cliffhangers are hard to put it so I was glad when I realised I could do it to the end of this chapter. Especially since cliffhangers are great and sometimes a bit evil but they want you to keep reading :D

I'll make sure to check over and edit!

Thanks again!! :)

-Potterfan310
Soph x


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