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Review:nott theodore says:

I really enjoyed this chapter, but it was a bit of a love-hate enjoyment! I love Dom and Ignotus together and it was great to see more of them in this chapter, because I've been missing it in recent chapters. There was so much of them together here that it more than made up for it!

There was so much emotion in this chapter and I loved the way you wrote the passion between Dominique and Ignotus. I'm glad that Dominique finally admitted how she felt about Ignotus, although I kind of wish the 'problems' of Brigid and Callum would just disappear! I think that Ignotus is going to have to explain to Dominique about Brigid soon, because I really don't want her to marry Callum in response!

However I do think that you wrote the part about what Dominique's prospects are really well. The realisation that she doesn't have anything to help her in the future if she remains in 1234. It really highlighted how much her life has changed with the time travel - all of the considerations for marriage in Ignotus' time would not have mattered before for Dominique, but now her life is controlled by them, which makes me feel really sorry for her.

I would like to know a bit more about what Dominique's family are experiencing with her missing and whether they have worked out what has happened to her yet. I find it interesting that Dominique has started collecting the ingredients to make the potions that sent her back to 1234, and I wonder whether she will actually make the potion at all when it comes down to it - and if the effects will be the same. I'm kind of hoping that, from the title, Ignotus and Dom can be together in the end!

Anyway, great chapter and I'm really looking forward to the next update!

nott theodore :)

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much for this incredibly helpful review! I can't tell you how much this means to me.

Ah and it was so lengthy and full of great and helpful comments!! Thank you so much.

And hopefully I can ease that want of yours to get back to 2022! ;) I'm planning some 2022 scenes in chapter 16! :)

And thanks for everything you mentioned! I know people don't want her to marry Callum. I'm always 100% rootin' for her and Ignotus, so you'll just have to see! Thanks for having the patience to bear with me through all of this though to have faith that she and Ignotus will pull through! That's the sign of a true, faithful reader and reviewer to me! :D

Again, thank you SO MUCH! Your reviews are incredible!! Thanks and hope to see you back soon! :)

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