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Review:nott theodore says:

I realised when this story was updated with chapter fourteen that I hadn't left you a review on this chapter, and I really wanted to so I'm doing it now!

I have to say that I think you've developed Callum's character really well and his growing role in this story is interesting - and going to complicate life a bit more for Dominique and Ignotus, I think! If it wasn't for Ignotus, I would say that Dominique and Callum were a good match. I thought you wrote the scene when Callum asks for Ignotus' permission very well, and it's nice to see that Jocosa and Dominique are friends. Dominique's personality, and the time she came from, are obviously appealing to a lot of people and mean that they can act differently around her. Anyway, a great chapter!

nott theodore :)

Author's Response: Ack! Thank you so much!! I always look forward to your reviews. They are so helpful and really mean a lot to me.

Thanks for the input you provided! I'm glad to see that you agree with most things I'm doing and the characterizations and such! It really does make me so happy and it eases my paranoia quite a bit.

Thanks again! So much! I hope to see you back for the next chapter. Your reviews really do always make my day!

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