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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
I must say that this is quite a interesting idea for a story as I do love the pairing of Remus and Tonks. I'm glad that you have decided to give a go at showing how they came together as the book didn't really give much information about how or when it happened. So it will be very interesting to see what you have come up with here. I can see you have some real fun with this storyline.

Your characterization of Tonks is wonderful as you can defiantly tell that it is her character. Only thing I might suggest is to through a 'Wotcha' or two in as it's kinda like her catchphrase in away. Though other than that I think your wrote her really well. The flow is rather nice with maybe a few grammar slip ups here and there but nothing too distracting. Keep up the good work!

~Hallows!

Author's Response: Yes I do love that pairing too. I think that's why I decided to write it as it was just sprung on us in the books! Yes this story is proving to be rather fun!

I'm so glad that you found her in character, as that was my biggest worry, I'll try and add in some 'Wotcha', but it was rather hard to find the right place!

I'll try and find those grammar slip ups they always seem to get the better of me!

Thanks for the great review,

-Kiana :D


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