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Review:MissMdsty says:
Oh I love Tonks! She is so... Tonks. I can't find just one word to describe her. I guess if I tried the word would be "supercalifragilisticexpialidocious". Back to her (and you, lovely author).

Your humor really shined in this chapter! The part about her breaking the Statue of Secrecy as a child made me crack up. This character you've built has a very fine sense of irony regarding her own person and I love to see that in fiction, since it's something I do and I love in other people. Hey, if you can't laugh at yourself, you're going to have a boring life!

Also, I really liked how she vaguely remembers something in the papers about a Tournament. Trust Tonks to vaguely recall one of the most important moments in all of HP fandom!

The interactions between her and Remus are so sweet, it's like she's testing the ocean's temperature with a toe and he's well...Remus!

As for Remus, you described him really in character here. We all have this image of Remus, the professor, the Marauder, but I was reminded reading this of the part in the books where he says Harry (and us, by extension) has only seen him at Hogwarts or with the Order. I think prejudice against werewolves is so. unjustified. He goes through a transformation once a month in the night time. He might need a day or two off if it doesn't fall on a weekend. And come to think of this, why isn't anybody selling Wolfsbane Potion? You're all a bunch of full grown wizards, wands and all, scared of something you have the ability to control, yet in the whole of the series, only one guy knows how to make the potion that control this illness and that people would gladly take?

Y'all deserve for old "Noseless" to take over.

I'm done with my rant on werewolves rights!

I look forward to reading more of the Tonks/Remus relationship as it develops. Especially since I'm sure she'll offer us more comic relief in the mean time! Good job dear! A very good chapter! Please request again when you update!

Ral

Author's Response: Hey Ral!

I'm so glad that you love Tonks, I can't describe how much that means to me! I'm really glad that you liked the funny parts, as I don't tend to write comedy so I was a little unsure about them! I guess with the irony, I tend to do it too, so it was easy to fit in!

I thought it was important to slip that part in about the tournament, as it does seem like something she would do! I'm glad that you liked the little interactions between the two as well, as I loved writing them!

Yeah I was tempted to go into werewolf rights in this chapter as they make me angry too, but then I realised Bill and Tonks didn't know he was one, so it might be a bit weird!

I enjoyed reading your rant though! I hope you enjoy the next chapter too :D

Thanks for another great review,

-Kiana :D


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