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Review:Genia says:
This is so sad! When will it get any better? If it gets any worse, I think I need to take a break from reading, otherwise I'll get depressed!(I should study anyway... but it seems impossible to stop reading this story! It's so good! Although you're really mean to your main character right now. Make him better!)
I almos cried reading this! I feel sooo sorry for James, though unfortunately, I can understand Sinead and Demelza. But... poor James!
I wish Carlotta would come back. I understand all those issues James has are a bit much for her, especially since she just wanted a bit of fun with him... but still she was a bit harsh. He opened up to her - finally, to someone, I'd say - and all she has to say is "well, had I'd known this, I wouldn't have contiuned this 'fling' with you" and ignores him. Which I can partly understand... but still. She has to come round!
Or maybe Harry could help majorly by clearing up that he is, indeed, not disappointed at all? (which I hope very much... It doesn't seem like Harry to dwell on his initial disappointment because James chose another career path...) I think James needs his Dad.
But I'm sure you know where this is going. And I'm excited for everything to come! And slightly nervous, because as I said, it will be difficult to handle any more James-drama and sadness and him pushing away everyone.
It's so sad! Do something!

Author's Response: This is about as bad as things get, luckily! Not that there's MUCH scope for things to get worse, but then I think I could have managed if I really wanted to ... but no, this is James' trough. He had to be suspended, and actually he needed it, because he needed to learn that he's not invincible and that he IS responsible for his actions.

Carlotta WAS harsh. But at the same time he did dump a lot on her - and she had her own reasons for acting as she did. She and Harry are certainly the only two with the ability to help James fix things because the two biggest issues here are James' relationship with his dad, and the way he's used by girls. Unfortunately Harry doesn't have huge amounts of tact in this situation! Thanks for reviewing :)


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