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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
I must say while pregnancy stories aren't really my thing I found that the way you handled this was rather tasteful with just enough information about what is going on without getting too deep into things. You've taken what is a sensitive topic and played out in a way that doesn't make people uncomfortable when reading which is indeed a good skill to have.

I like who you have played out the relationship between Rose and Lily as I too think they would be rather close and so I think it fits in nicely with your plot. The flow was nice and while there was a few grammar error's it was an overall good opening chapter that I didn't mind reading even though it wasn't the type of fanfiction that I usually read.

~Hallows!

Author's Response: Hello :)

I'm glad you think that the Lily/Rose closeness is just right, I did have doubts at first but decided to go with it anyway.

I'm glad you thought it was written well, thank you!!

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'll be sure to request again :)

-Potterfan310
Soph x


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