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Review:Debra20 says:
Zayne! I am finally here to review this. Sorry it took me so long but I had a long waiting list, plus uni work. But as promised, I have arrived! And I am glad I did :D

First off allow me to extend my warmest and honest congratulations on your description skills. You have a gift when it comes to depicting feelings. They are true and deep and when you mix them with the visual images your words carry of the outside world, it creates a truly beautiful painting of the story. I really don't have much to say about this other than words of praise :D

Dorcas! I loved it that in the end, when he finally came for her she decided not to give in so easily. Sure, she didn't put up a fight because in her mind it was futile to fight against Lord Voldemort once he set his eyes on someone, but what's most important is that she kept her interior strength and went to her death with courage. Not many can say that they can stare certain death in the eyes and still maintain composure. I don't know if I could.

I really liked your characterization of Dorcas. She seemed very human in this, with believable emotions. She is longing for her childhood friend, her lover and now that he is dead, she has no reason to live any more. I'm wondering how he was and how was their relationship. And I am curious about her, more than anything. You write her as one of the most prominent figures of the First Order. I wonder what she's done to deserve all that faith people put in her. And I wonder above else what she has done to make Voldermort come after her himself. This is why I don't like one shots - I NEED TO KNOW MORE haha

Very veyr nice piece hun! I enjoyed it a lot!

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your kindness! I'm blown away by your compliments and i'm really happy you like my sense of description. I always find the emotion the most interesting bit of writing and i'm happy that shows through without being too overbearing.

Dorcas probably wouldn't have gone easy, but I also think that there was a sense of resignation. If LV chose to kill her specifically what else could she do? She wasn't going to hide as that wasn't in her character but fighting had become so futile to her mind. She's lost grasp a little on reality I think as well in this and her world just sort of imploded on her.

Thank you so much for your compliments. I do plan on writing more about Dorcas actually. Just started on another piece because she has captured my attention and i've been forming her in my mind. It will be a one-shot probably but it will probably give more information about her background and why she was chosen.

Thanks so much for stopping by!


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