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Review:missclaire17 says:
Unexpected plot twist!

There are so many things that I love, and I don't know where to start. I suppose I'll start by saying that I loved it when you wrote how Hermione and Astoria got along. Somehow, I'd always imagine that Astoria was the one that really grounded the Malfoys into acceptance after the war. Because Astoria was two years younger than Draco, I imagined that she was so far removed from that entire crowd and even from the crowd that Ginny was around in her year that it would be so much fresher for everyone to see her with Draco.
I also imagine her to be a very warm lady with a charming and easy-going personality that would make anyone get along with her.

I also love that you don't clue us in to what Rose feels like is missing from her and Scorpius's life, until later it was discovered that she couldn't have a baby. The fact that we discovered that she not being able to have a baby was what's wrong coupled by the fact that we already know by the point of discovery that Rose IS going to have a baby lessens the whole degree of sadness, if that made any sense at all.

I also love what Scorpius said about embracing and being grateful for miracles, because it's so true.

Author's Response: Hello!

This story is very dear to me, because I took my inspiration from a friend who went through the same thing and she's expecting any day now! We couldn't happier! It's truly a miracle when against all odds life finds a way to pull through!

I imagine Astoria to be everything Draco isn't. Calm, compassionate, kind and friendly. Not that he wouldn't change, but really. He needs somebody like that in his life!

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I really appreciate it!


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