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Review:Jessica says:
Ah. Finally.
It was a nice job you did with Clemence's character development. I loved it when she was so grumpy.
But the last part- I never expected it. I thought they would be extremely awkward for days and that the incident would harden Clemence's resolve of staying away from Albus, but yeah, I guess it's probably her way of showing she actually cares. And uh oh. Another team war in the making! God. I'm sort of getting exasperated with those. But if that's how that's how the story must progress, so be it.
When will you update Capers?
When will you update the NEXT chapter of etc.?
I know you're very busy and everything.. but will those two events occur before the end of this year? (I wish I was kidding)
I went through half the chapter like "Yeah, that's right. Put him in his place, you go, Clemence!" and the last bit I was like- :o. "Wha...?" I really cannot believe she kissed him in public.
Whoa.

Author's Response: I thought of a few ways Clemence would handle the morning after, and I went against temptation to make her avoid Albus. At the end of the last chapter, I wanted her to be *aware* of what she was about to do and that it was her choice and not the alcohol, and she does not run from her own choices. Shakes things up a bit!

Clemence and Appy's rivalry is not going to be like Rose and Dom's at all (sans the crazy followers); it actually has a lot more to do with ah, Clemence taking over the QGA ;)

Capers is next to be updated, all the final chapters at once, but that'll take a bit of time. And then after that, etc will be my main fic! Sorry for the long wait for this chapter; I actively try to write, and I /want/ to write, but I'm trying to mind real life first even when I don't particularly want to :P

Thank you for reading!


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