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Review:harrietm says:
Nawww, a filler but a cute filler. The whole theme of "what is love?", very nice!
Speaking of love, loved the book analysis, how symbolic and deep of you ;) And there's still hope for Jellie! (or at least I like to think there is!) A small criticism, you sometimes use language that's very similar very close together...eg"wince at my stupid answer" and "wince at my stupid response"...just watch it cos it is repetitive and not as smooth to read as it could be :)
Also it will be interesting to see what happens with Leo...hmmm.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, keep it up :D

Author's Response: Hello there!

So...yeah...I wrote this chapter in a couple of hours (don't tell anyone), because I wanted to get something in while I battled with the next chapter :/. I know, I should have just worked out the blasted thing and put it up when I figured it out, but I didn't...

Er, right so...the books are favourites of mine :P they happen to be on my desk right now, so I tweaked them into the story. Jellie is slowly progressing, eh? I'm hoping the plot isn't too slow :/

I think Leo's conclusion will be the most surprising for readers to read. I'm so excited for you to read it! ;D (I'm giggling like a two year old right now)


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