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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello!

I just have to say I really love this story! Especially how you write from both Alexa and Albus' points of view, because we get a better insight into both characters. I think one of the best things about your stories is that every character seems to have their own story, and that makes the plot much more interesting than just reading about one character and all of the others not really being developed.

Anyway, onto the actual chapter... Albus worries so much that it's really endearing. I'm sure he overthinks things more than girls generally do - more than Lexi seems to, as well. It was sweet to see how much he cares about his friends here, and that he wants to help them. Xavier's reaction does seem realistic, because I can't imagine it would be easy to find out that you actually are a father when you were told that your child had died. I can't blame him for going a bit crazy!

I'm really intrigued about what the relationship between Xavier and Cody actually is. For Cody to leave his NYE party to help Xavier, they must be quite close, plus Xavier has obviously told him a lot more about his past than Albus and any of us thought. It made me laugh that they all thought Xavier was drunk and he was completely sober, and was a lot more rational when he actually spoke to them than I expected.

I didn't expect him to go to Stewart to help him deal with finding out about Ethan, but I really like Stewart's character. He loves Tasha and Ethan, but he can see enough to know that what Tasha told Xavier was wrong. He's very level-headed, and I think that he is going to be a big help in the whole situation. The fact that he isn't insisting on being called Dad by Ethan, and is making sure that Xavier knows he isn't trying to usurp his place make him seem like a genuinely nice person, and I think both Tasha and Xavier are lucky that he is involved.

The way you portrayed the meeting between Xavier and Ethan was realistic, too, and I was glad about that. Ethan seems like a really cute kid, and although it's going to take a long time for them to build up a relationship and it won't be easy for anyone involved, I'm glad that Tasha has agreed to let Xavier meet Ethan and things can hopefully move forward from the mistakes they all made.

There wasn't much Lexi and Albus in this chapter but their characters still came through well. Lexi's frankness is really funny here, like how she admits that she's come along because she's nosy. Plus, she's using the pregnancy thing to her full advantage (who wouldn't?) to get what she wants.

And you've made me very curious about Louis and the whole vampire/werewolf situation. I hope there'll be more of that to come as well, because I really want to know about it!

Sorry for the mammoth review, but I really do love your story and your writing, so I hope you update again soon!

nott theodore :)

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