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Review:adluvshp says:
Hi there! AditiDraco95 here for your requested review from the forums.

Ah, I can see a definite improvement in this chapter as compared to your previous ones. Maybe you should stick to such shorter chapters as obviously your flow is better in them. But if you do take that advice, make sure to update your short chapters frequently =)

I like how Mikaela is still not ready to see Nicholas' face. It is definitely going to take her some time to come to terms with her marriage, so I am glad you're keeping it realistic that way.

I enjoyed meeting the other Next-Gen characters here too. Dominique seems fun and cool, and Alex seems more calm, and interesting as well. I am excited to meet the others now as well, especially Nicholas, and see his side of the situation.

I am curious to see what happens in the party. So far, your story's pace seems to be good, and the flow between chapters is smooth enough. Your grammar, sentence structure and organisation etc. has also improved greatly in this one, so kudos to your beta and you =)

Good going. Keep writing!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thankyouuu Aditii :D
xx Em


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