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Review:AlexFan says:
You had some grammatical errors and I would personally suggest showing that you were switching points of view because it was kind of abrupt going from one character to another. Also, I'm confused, I've got no idea what's going on or how all of these things are related. What exactly is going on?

Anyway, seems like a pretty interesting start.

Author's Response: Hey! Well a lot is happening. This was a start tht really describes the girls. If you look at the summary you can assume tht somehow the girls will be related (it's part of the plot)

Um I'm not sure what you don't understand. Like each individual part of the story or how it all connects? It's a prologue. After this chp, every chp will be from one respective so it will make more sense.

I'm sorry tht it wasn't clear the character change. I assumed tht the line break and a new start setting would explain the change in POV.

Thank you for reviewing !

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