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Review:ObsessedReaderfromtheMoon says:
'Kay. So, I am starting to really love this story. It is quite funny, a tiny bit cliche with the pregnancy bit but not so much as its james/oc instead of rose/ scorpius, and your writing is flawless. Ps. I love cliche things with a bit of a twist. :)

Jamsie Poo, Jimmy Jams, James - whatever you'd like to call him- is perfect. I mean, his characteristics are clever and witty and smart. I love his whole The Look concept and I adore the fact that he spurts out random facts when he's nervous or just trying to get out of a sticky situation.

Selene is great too. For some reason, I feel a lot of admiration for her and I haven't really thought about why. She's just one of those characters that you immediately feel compassion for and yes, she's pregnant but her whole way of going about taking care of her baby and her sincerity to james about everything is beautiful.

As i said before, Ginny is excellently portrayed. But, now thinking about it, Harry is well portrayed too. You give us tiny tidbits of his personality subtly and I really enjoy the fact that you highlight his family first quality.

And, now that the characters are now at a safe point in the story, I am extremely eager to see what chaos ensues. I know your writing this week because you have break, but don't feel too pressured to write. We (your readers) know that you write out of your love to write and that you have a real life and don't always write because of your own personal life.

We love you and I can't tell you how happy it made me to realize that you had another story for me to read. I'm also on break this week and thought, well let's check on some old favorites and I saw this. I'm thrilled and I can't tell you how fantastic this piece of work is!

Please have a great week off! 10/10 m'dear! (Also, sorry about the long review!!!)

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! That was such a lovely review - no need to apologize for the length!

The whole premise of this story was to take one of your typical cliches from this site and try and put a new perspective and fresh twist to it - giving people something familiar, but in a different way, so to speak - so I'm really glad people seem to be responding well to it!

James just might be my most favorite character of all the ones I've written. I love being inside his head and writing all of his insanity.

I'm glad you like Selene. For the most part, people seem to be a bit indifferent to her, but I'm hoping that'll change with future chapters. I can't wait to tell more of her story.

Writing Harry is probably the most nerve-wracking thing I've ever done. It's so hard to do it because we all know and love Harry so much.

Right now, the plan is to be working in some more subplots and other things. I'd really like for this story to be less about a teen pregnancy and more about just the general insanity and goings-on of James's life - a large portion of which, admittedly, is focused on a teen pregnancy.

I've got around 5000 words of the next chapter written at this point and am getting close to finishing it. I'm tentatively hoping to put it in queue within the next two days.

Once again, thank so very much for your (very very) wonderful review, which now has a long response to match it!

Have a lovely break!

-Laura


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