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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hahaha there Darcy was trying to focus on her walk and the girls walk, and Albus was just trying to get her talk. I can understand her bitter mood, and it would almost be odd if she didnít have one. Though I did feel a bit sorry for Albus due to her blatant attempts of trying not to talk to him, at least she agreed in the end.

Rose seemed different in this chapter, and it was a nice different. Usually she was just focused on herself and not much else, but in this chapter she seemed to be more concerned about the competition and how she could win it. She seemed more like her mother here, and it was a nice change. I think it was the whole bit about her brainstorming poses with Lily, as it just seemed like something Hermione would do.

Scorpius is a model? For some reason, he being one seems to work really well in my mind. I think itís because Lucius and Draco always seemed really vain, and I think if youíre a model you have to be rather vain to succeed so it works. And that was that mention about Rose liking him before, I wonder how this is going to turn out thenÖ

Then there was Dom fawning over him. I found it funny that the sole reason he was doing this was for good press, it just seemed like a strange way for getting it. Of course Rose would get all gutsy and go and to talk him! Rose and Scorpius are my guilty pleasure so this brightened my day! Then the way he was like perhaps we could do some work together, and Rose was getting all excited Ė it was so sweet. Haha and the way he reacted to her being Rose, and she was just like yeah I know who you are but I still like you. It was a nice show of over confidence not an annoying one.

Yay Dom is now on the Darcy/Albus side (I really need to come up with a ship name!)! I rather like that Albus is a closed sort of person, because that might explain why he didnít get his hopes up about that dinner, as he didnít want to be crushed. Dom must be serious if sheís considering family holidays for her to attend! Oh well, Iíll guess all will be revealed in that talk Albus wanted.

Another great chapter Amanda, and I canít wait to see what happens next!

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel pulled in opposite directions with Albus and Darcy, and that you can identify with both of them. I kind of feel bad for torturing Albus like this, but Darcy has a lot of awkward to deal with, and she's not good at it.

I like to think that underneath her shallow nature Rose has a keen mind, one that has gotten her this far in her career and will take her even further. I like that you said she was like Hermione except that she puts her intellect to a different use other than school. It's probably a strength of hers that she looks girly and easily perturbed but is actually tough and smart underneath the exterior.

I think my Scorpius is somewhat inspired by Toujours_Padfoot's Le Scorp. He isn't quite as outlandish, but he does have that sort of vanity that allows him to put up blinders to everyone else if he so chooses. I thought he also had Draco's laziness and sense of self-importance :)

I love the Rose-Scorpius interaction because I see it as being a duel of two arrogant people. I imagine both of them walked away thinking that they had the upper hand in the end. They provide some good comic relief for me.

Dalbus? Alcy? No, I can't find one that I like, LOL. Yeah, Dominique is warming up to the idea that if someone is going to date one of her family members, it might as well be someone who she knows that she likes. Stay tuned to see what Albus wants to talk about :)

Thanks for another amazing review, Kiana!


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