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Review:patronus_charm says:
I said I would check this out ages ago, itís just things kept on preventing me from doing so! But, Iím here now!

I liked that carefree scene you painted at the beginning. It was nice to see that there could still be that brotherly competition in the midst of a war. It was just really sweet and endearing to see and gave me fuzzies!

I liked how you didnít make it too happy, as that wouldnít have been realistic. Instead you add reality to it by, making have scars too. Then with her scars too! It just made me want to hug her, as she went through so much, yet she wasnít emphasising on it. That was just her, as I never thought she would be one to dwell on the past too much.

We never get to see the newly wedded Fleur and Bill in their marital bliss, as theyíre either having their wedding crashed (cue Busted!) or having a ton of unexpected guests arrive. By making her run into the water, it was just so unexpected, yet fitting. You could tell how in love they were, and it perhaps foreshadowed what Ron and Hermione will be like in the following years.

Aw Ron was too cute too! The way he was checking that Hermione was watching made me laugh, as he sounded as if he was still a child. Yet he could be mature at the same time, when he held her hand, because he must have sensed how hard and tiring this must be for her. That contrast was great as it really did reflect his character well!

The ending was a perfect way to round off this story. The way she fell in love just by watching him seemed so natural and so her it made my heart warm.

Another excellent one-shot!

-Kiana :D

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