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Review:LittleMissPrincess says:
okay so i actually had a review written in here because i read this like 3 hours ago, but then i just randomly left it unfinished and then went to other tabs, and got stuck on tumblr for like an hour and im not sure what happened but i closed google chrome and THEN I REALIZED I HADN'T SENT THE REVIEW YET SO - *SAD*

yeah so im sorry you ain't getting a nice long one. im not typing it again. ugh lyf.

but basically i just talked about how edie's life sucks with the lack of job and house, and HOW OLIVER SOOO LIKES HER! I MEAN THATS OBVIOUSLY WHAT HE WANTS TO TALK ABOUT HAHA SUCK ON THAT, ROSE.

and ehermm...ahh yes, so i think its literally so cute that edie actually bought the paper that has then (almost) kissing OKAY THEY KISSED OKAY. I BELIEVE IT. THEY WERE GOING TO ANYWAY.

yeah so CUTENESS.
also something else i wanted to say...

i think there should be more on the actually article. like say, rose finds it, or someone else at edie's workplace find it, and they're like "rose, you're interviewing him, ask him who the mystery girl is." and SO EVERYONE WANTS TO KNWO WHO IT IS, BUT ONLY EDIE KNOWS ITS EDIE. and then since rose isn't actually the one takign the interview - edie has to ask who the mystery girl is, but then she cant and just idk you're the write so PLOT TWIST.

also, i just really love yuo. and all the magical devices you slip in. i mean, with all the two way mirrors, and like the magical pubs, and 'awkwardly asking edie out for a drink'.

its like : SIMON = * AGGRESSIVELY ASKS OUT EDIE*

OH RIGHT! i remember now! i had written a bunch of ediver puns. like jumping into the ediver of shipping and somethign like that. idk. it was good though.

egads.
yeah thats all i have to say...but YAY UPDATE! maybe ples update soon again sil vous plait?

okays bye.

Author's Response: Ugh, I think I spent roughly 43872971 hours on tumblr yesterday, so I totally understand.

I decided to have Edie buy the paper because I wanted to show how she is with guys. I go on to talk about it more in the next chapter, but this was a little preview. She looks down on Rose for getting attached too soon, but look at her going off and buying a copy of the magazine! That's definitely getting a little attached, isn't it? ;3

Oh, this picture is actually a huge plot point. And I want to talk more about it, but I can't! Sorry! It will all be revealed... like nine chapters down the road xD

bahahaha the Ediver of Shipping. I will think on some puns and get back to you. Because what's better than a pun? (Answer: more puns.)

Thank you so much! Your review was really entertaining to read ♥


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