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Review:JordanQ says:
Hey, this is a good chapter.
first of all i like that Scorpius actually cares for Al and moreover there is something about in his case as he froze when he heard her name and then stuttered i guess someone has a crush on Rose.
And Al not believing that Dom is good well i hope he believe it soon.
His escaping form James well lets wish there misunderstanding clears out and i want to see how Ron is going to react about Rose being in ravenclaw
And for tryouts hope they get positions

I liked the converstaion between Snape and Al and Al's reaction on knowing that he was named after him

and Why the hell Centaurs are attacking human, i thought there was peace between them and Humans
Phew atleast something saved Al
I think it's Sirius

Update soon

Author's Response: Thank you!
Haha, Scorpius might have a crush - although he's probably just nervous to be friends with a Weasley and Potter. xD But Scorpius really does care for Al. :)

Al, is just a little surprised that his cousin is being nice. He doesn't spend as much time with Dom as Rose does so, he doesn't really see her good or nice side.

Haha, he's just a little concerned how James would react upon seeing him. Last time didn't turn out so well.
Ron's reaction will be a part of an upcoming chapter - along with Al telling Harry and Ginny. :)

And tryouts, I have something planned, but I'm not completely sure what. Right now it's fair game for what will happen.

The conversation between Al and Snape was fun to write. I just feel Snape wouldn't be too super excited that Harry named a kid after him. Al has of course, seen pictures of Snape when he was younger, but didn't place the face when he first saw him - mainly because the pictures he saw never talked back. His dreams of Snape being nice were somewhat shattered.

The Centaurs will be explained in later chapters, but there is a reason. :)

Al was kind of in a tight spot, but something or someone did scare the Centaurs off. I like your guess and you'll find out what saved him soon. Not the next chapter, but soon.

This chapter was actually updated last week and I went through editing some of the other chapters - but the next chapter should be up tomorrow hopefully. :)

Thank you for the review!
Taz


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