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Review:missclaire17 says:
Hello love! I'm here with a review for you.

It's quite interesting, all the little pieces so far (:
It seems like a puzzle piece that we have to put together, and I can see where you got the inspiration for your title from.

One suggestion though, to make things a bit clearer and to keep everything in order.
Make a vague timeline for each of the sections.
For example, a date (or just a year) for her being interrogated for a crime, a date/year for her parents kicking her out, a date/year for her being in Knockturn Alley. That way, it's a bit clearer. I followed it just fine, but it's a suggestion (:

Also, I find Roseanna's personality very interesting. Having a child? Being a pureblood? Being a Seer? Accused of a crime? A strange society wanting her?

There's a lot going on with just Roseanna herself that it seems like there is a lot more to this whole story. If she is just one part of the entire puzzle piece, this must be one grand scheme xD

It's interesting so far and very mysterious, which I do like for story genres like this. (:

~Claire

Author's Response: Hey Claire! Nice to see you !

They are three different characters, which might help w the people clarification :P

I will totally add a timeline, I didn't realize it would be this confusing :P

Im glad you liked it!! This is like my baby hahah so let's just hope I can help it make more sense from now on :D


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