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Review:AlexFan says:
Okay, I'll keep this short and sweet. I have mixed feelings about this, the writing wasn't bad but the mixed feelings is mostly for Teddy.

You had a few grammatical and punctuational errors that I couldn't help but notice (they just jump out at me now without me even looking for them).

I want to like Teddy but at the same time, I can't. He seems very abusive and possessive if the way he spoke and thought were any indication and go Dom for standing up to him! I may not think what she did was right but I admire her for standing up.

I feel bad for their fiancés though, I would hate to find out the person I was engaged to was fooling around with someone else (it'd be more horrible if it was my sister, if I had one).

Anyway, I still enjoyed the one-shot and it's definitely unique and different so great job on a pairing I don't usually see.

Author's Response: Hey!

I'll go bk and look at the errors you mentioned (thanks for doing tht!)

I wanted to make him seem different from the normally awesome and happy go lucky Teddy we usually see.

He isn't necessarily abusive he's just a bit hot headed haha.

Im glad you liked it !

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