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Review:AlexFan says:
All I have to say is that this chapter was absolutely hilarious. I had to shove my fist into my mouth to keep from bursting into laughter otherwise I would've gotten busted.

Anyway, the parts that I found absolutely hilarious were these parts:

"Only once or twice..." He quirks an eyebrow disbelievingly and I add, "...a month."

And the part where she asks Oliver to talk to Amelia Jones and he says "hanging up now Lennox." I was so amused by that and you can really tell that Edie and Oliver have become really close friends.

I also loved the parts where she started guessing a new passwords. I lost it at Veela tits personally.

The ending was pretty funny too. I couldn't stop grinning because it seemed exactly like something me and my bestfriend would do if we were in Edie's position.

Anyway, great chapter!

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you thought it was so funny! I didn't know if the whole deal with Edie writing to Amelia would do well. Originally it wasn't in the story at all, but then when I went back and edited "The Proposition," I added it to the story. I was nervous that seeing it in this chapter would be too out-of-the-blue for people who hadn't read the edit!

I'm glad you liked the bit with the passwords ;3 (But please make sure your language in reviews is 12+)

Thanks so much! ♥


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