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Review:AlexFan says:
Hello! Okay, so I came across this and I really like James an Lily. Anyway, I'm going to get the criticism out of the way.

Lily sounded like she was whining the entire time (especially the part where she got annoyed because James wasn't paying attention to her while they were at a Quidditch Game). That's what it felt like to me at least but I'm sure you didn't mean it that way. There were also some grammatical errors that maybe you should fix.

I loved James though and Lily seemed pretty nice, this was a really cute one-shot and I really enjoyed it. Good job on it!

Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks. Nice to hear that you liked it.
I thought Lily was a little whiny myself, but I didn't really know how to fix it...
Any tips would be welcome.
I'm not the best at grammar so I'm going to find a beta for that.

Thanks for the review!
Maya


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