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Review:patronus_charm says:
Ok I love your Bellatrix, so of course I had to come and check this out :D

I really liked how you made the fear of muggleborns be born out of legend. Stories like that act as a basis for so much of our lives, so it made sense that the idea about mudbloods would be born that way too. It almost made their hate for them even scarier, by the fact that they’re indoctrinating their children into this at such a young age.

Then the bit about how they are almost born to think that the mudbloods are beneath them was really chilling again. It almost reminded me of royalty and how they used to think that anyone without a title was not worth recognising, and you caught this here too, which was really great.

Then the way you tied it in to how she wanted to help the Dark Lord in his aim of ridding the world of these people, just seemed perfect for her. Then the bit about how she loved it when they were frightened was so chilling, yet perfect again. You really have written her sadistic nature perfectly!

It was really interesting that she viewed her blood status as a gift, and thus enabling her to treat those without her blood as if they were worthless.

I really liked the start to this story, it was so chilling, and it really made you think about where this hatred of the muggleborns came from! It was a great start Jami!

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Awww I know it probably sounds creepy, but I love that you love my Bellatrix. I'm rather proud of her BTF role, haha.

I agree completely with what you said about legends being something that introduce a child to a thought that isn't all together right. Especially at such a young age. It's something we don't like to think about, but there's still plenty of racist and sexist people out there. Not too long ago we were killing people because they were dark and courting a white woman (in the US, that is) so the idea of what Bellatrix believes isn't something completely unfathomable. Plenty of real life people have been like that. Exploring what get her to the point where she'll give anything for the cause and Voldemort is really what I'm looking forward to.

Ummm I don't know how I just got on such a ramble tangent... haha! Your reviews have made me such a happy girl! Or, should I say bunny rabbit :P

Thank you for being so awesome and making me excited to put up new BTF chapters and work on new stories ♥


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