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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
Great chapter!! Wow bungs are getting so dramatic! I wonder if I was right about Al...if he likes her, that is. Because I mean it's possible that he's just angry because he knows it's not that smart of a choice and he doesn't want her to get used...or something...oh forget it. He definitely likes her. He was hoping she'd kiss him. Then she went for his brother. Ouch. Poor Al :( he's such a sweetheart! He should t have punched James, though, unless James knew he liked Halle...
And we all know James likes Halle. But will he own up to it? It's causing tension with Al big time and who knows where that will go...but also...going off the way he treats other girls (like Erica) he doesn't really seem like the boyfriend type. I hope we see that he is capable of that, though. I'd hate to find out he's that immature and mysogynistic.
If he doesn't remember and Halle doesn't tell him, I'm sure he'll find out about it from someone. What will they say to each other once they're sober? I'm curious for sure.
I also want to know what the cool ball-sphere-metal-thing does! And the numbers!
Update soon!

Author's Response: aha, thanks serendipity1234
hehe, im extremely glad you're actually reading into the story, i put the next chapter in the queue and hopefully that clears up some of the Al-related tension.
hehe, next chapters the morning after, and its a bit awkward, thats for sure. and the cool-ball-sphere-metal-thing shall make its return!
thanks for the lovely review :D


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