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Review:Lululuna says:
I like this a lot! The reverse character traits are great: I like how Rose comes across as more shallow instead of Hermione-esque and the Potter boys and Dominique are the down to earth ones, while usually its the reverse. It would make sense that the next gen would be influenced by celebrity and beauty. Also, Darcy's family makes a very interesting sub-plot. Albus and Darcy would make a cute couple, and I'm excited to see where this leads. Great work!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear from you :)

I try to mix up the cliches I see in other stories, just to make the characters more interesting. I'm not as well-versed in next gen cliches because I just don't read a lot of next gen, so I'm happy that these characterizations work for you and seem to buck the trends.

I'm glad you like Darcy, too! I like to think of her as just being a normal girl, struggling through young adulthood and trying to figure out the world as well as herself. It's great that you liked that tie into canon with the Cresswells, and that you're eager to see what develops between Darcy and Albus :)

Thanks for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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