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Review:alicia and anne says:
No! How can you have that beautifully descriptive beginning and then have that happen to Teddy? I can't believe he doesn't have long left to live.
I don't want him to lie to everyone.
And to have Teddy ask Harry what Harry asked Sirius about dying was heartbreaking, I nearly cried right there and then, I'm so upset right now, how could you do that to me?
That death was so heartbreaking, I can't believe he died in Louis's arms!
*not so quietly sobs on the floor from my heart being broken* I was expecting them to be happy and together! :-( Why did this happen?! Why!?
Other then my emotional breakdown this was a wonderful first chapter, so very sad and full of emotion.

Author's Response: That description is very deceiving, isn't it? Poor Teddy, it's so hard writing this because I just don't want anything to happen to Teddy. But unfortunately it has to. ;(

Just thinking of Ted's conversation with Harry makes me cry a little.

Yep, so much drama, without it actually having a lot of drama. Dying in his arms was just my breaking point; tears. That's all I'll say.

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