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Review:oldnumberseven says:
your description in this chapter is beautiful. i always like the first person point of view because i feel you can just convey more - if that makes any sense. i'm currently writing something with nine points of view and it's hard to put that much description into my writing because there is just so much going on.

but that's besides the point. this was a wonderful beginning and i can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm really pleased that you enjoy the first person feel of this story and that it helps you connect to the story. That's the whole point, i want this story to be felt.

I can imagine that would be hard to write and i wouldn't even know where to start with that many perspectives. It's brave of you to do it and i wish you much luck :P

I'm really pleased you enjoyed the beginning of this story, even if it's quite dark!

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