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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hi there! Siriusly89 here with the *sob!* last review of your prize!

I have enjoyed reading these three pieces so much! Just a reminder as to why you’re one of my favourite authors! *queue shameless fangirling*

Remus Lupin one-shot! Oooh yes! I am game for this one! He is one of my favourite characters ever, so I love this already, and I haven’t gotten past the first line!

You put a complete new twist on transforming into a werewolf. The sharper vision is a completely new thing, but now I think about it, it sort of makes sense? Werewolfs need to be able to see their prey from far away, so this really does ‘fit’ with the whole werewolf transformation thing.

The fact that this is set in Marauders era is also something different. Uusally when I read pieces about Remus’ transformation, they’re set in ‘Pre-Hogwarts’ or ‘Post-Sirius-Dying’, where Remus remembers sadly what it was like to run around the place with James, Sirius and Peter.

In the middle there for a bit, I thought it was set during POA, you know, when Remus attacked Sirius at full moon, and Peter escaped (you know when I mean!) but then the stag made his entrance, and I was all like “THAT’S JAMES!”

I also like how Remus recognised them, and stopped, er, attempting to kill them. Him snapping at James’ heels telling him to back off was a good inclusion though, because as he aptly said, he is a werewolf who could kill them if he wanted to, so don’t push him too hard, even if he does know who they are.

The last line had a slightly humorous feel to it, or is that just me? I can just see him saying this, half-smiling if that makes any sense whatsoever.

No? Just me? I have a weird sense of humour. . . .

Ah well.

10/10 again! (Three in a row!) How could I give it less?

Author's Response: Hiya! :D

Aww, thank you! :'D You're far too kind, missy!

Yeah, the last line is meant to be a bit humorous, he is a Marauder, remember. ;)

Thank you so much for all these reviews and compliments, every time I read the reviews I had this massive grin on my face. :D

And thanks again for the second place! ♥

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