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Review:ValWitch21 says:
I know that I originally said I didn't like Rose, but I'm growing to enjoy her more and more as the story develops. As always, you're making your characters multifacetted (I have no idea if that's a word in English), and it just makes them so much better to read about! The comment about coordinated complexions made me laugh, it's just so Rose.

I like the way you're touching on the developping link between Lily and Darcy -- is that supposed to smooth out the bumps there might be with Albus? Dom's input on the situation was nice to read about. I've discovered that I actually liked Dom in general, but having her portrayed as an always cheerful person, instead of a psychotic control freak is always a refreshing change.

I can't wait to read about their conversation, and see how things evolve between them! I also really want to find out about the outcome of the contest, and maybe see some Scorpius/Rose?

I think this chapter was my favourite so far, so I really can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Hah, thanks! I sort of like Rose. Her personality can be too much at times, and yet I can identify with her frustration and general lack of patience with others at times. I think we all can :)

I just view Lily, like her namesake, as this positive force that can bridge gaps and make peace between people. She seems to really "get" her brother, and I think she's perceptive in terms of how he interacts with Darcy. She just wants all of them to be happy, poor thing.

I'm not terribly familiar with Dominique's particular set of cliches, but yeah, I just think of her like a normal girl. She's clearly more into the glam thing and working at the magazine than Darcy, but I don't think she's quite as shallow and appearance-obsessed as, say, Rose. She's sort of multifaceted, too.

Well, stay tuned! The ride isn't over yet, and you'll just have to see what happens in the next chapter. Glad you're still enjoying the story!

Thanks for your fantastic review, Val :)


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