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Review:MissMoneypenny says:
I is officially enjoying story!

Meh, don't worry about the swearing. It adds to the character of the story.

I'm really enjoying it though, even though I've only read two chapters. Already the characters have been very cleverly conveyed, though I'm kind of confused how this chater and the previous one connect... Guess I'm just going to have to read on!

It's nice to see stereotypes being broken by Lily being the Potions whizz, because normally it's little Albie Sev, due to his namesake everything.
10/10 for a great story!

Author's Response: Hello :) I is glad you are!
I just wanted to warn people... 'people' being my mother, because she read it... :D
Nice to hear you are! To be honest, I don't quite know how it's clever, but... yay? I think it's just my writing style, maybe? It's sorta developed over my years of writing short stories- I'm quick at showing personality, I think. Yeah, it ties up well enough :)
Well, I always thought Lily would be, because she's more like Ginny but there's still her grandmother in her- I'm a lot like my grandmother(s), because they both loved reading. :)
Thank you so much! For the review, too.

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