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Review:Courtney Dark says:
How are you such an amazing writer? Every single chapter in this story is just so perfect - your characters, your descriptions, your plot, the random details and funny lines that just make me start laughing like a lunatic. This story honestly deserves a Dobby and I am so glad you wrote it!

There was so much to love about this chapter that I don't really know where to start. The second half of the interview was great, of course, and I loved how Oliver mentioned his relationship with Katie. I don't know, it made him seem so much more real, somehow. And also took me back to the Hogwarts days...sigh.

I love how freely Edie and Oliver were able to talk - or rather, debate - about Quidditch. They really are two amazing characters and they have awesome chemistry! I still don't know how you do it...

Edie's awkward little lines like 'pish posh' are brilliant. I actually laughed out loud when I read that, merely because I could imagine Edie sitting there and saying that. And although we didn't see much of Seamus in this chapter, he was amazing! He always brings so much humour to the chapter and I LOVE the relationship Edie has with Dean and Seamus.

This was a perfect chapter - I loved every moment of it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy my story enough to think it deserves a Dobby :3

I think that a long-term relationship like that makes total sense for Oliver. He's so devoted to Quidditch, as we see in the books, that I imagine he pours himself into everything that he views as important. He's a really adamant person, which is why he lasted so long with Katie.

Yesss Seamus. It's hard not to include him in every chapter xD

Thanks again ♥

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