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Review:Sugar Quills says:
Ok, I'm finally reviewing this, and read through it a second time to refresh my memory.
1st, time to fanboy, because Jack and Lily are so cute! Just DON'T kill him or make him turn evil (I know the amount of assurances you've given me, but still...)
2nd, After re-reading the chapter, I get the subtle message you talked about on the bus (Memories... How very clever, Miss Genower).
3rd, McFarland, the evil one. I hope he appears more often, as I would love to see Lily or Jack punch his face ^.^
4th, Eliana! She's finally back! But please, no more sad moments for her. Don't make her worse! Pwease...
5th, Jack's strides. I only mention this because you may have experienced this problem in real life... Is that why you put it in so much detail? :P
Anyway, I want MORE!! Gimme more chapters, I want them... And a 10/10 for this one ^.^

Author's Response: I'm very grateful for it, too.
1. They are adorable. And, I'd just like to point out, 'evil' is a societal construct and societal constructs have no place in my novels. Except ones that are useful (see 3).
2. I am very clever. Thank you for pointing that out. ;)
3. Sexist? Yes. Intimidating? Yes. Slightly predatory? Yes. Evil? No. I would love that too, omg. I might write a one-shot alternate version of this where that happens. That'd be awesome.
4. Yay! Can't a) tell you what's going to happen and b) change what I've planned, so if I have planned bad things... sorry.
5. It's nothing to do with Alex :P It's Jack and Lily.
I want more time to write... but coursework. So yeah. You'll have to make do like I do :D Thank you for reviewing!

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