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Review:TheHouseElf says:
Hey Jami! back again :D

Omg, I love your Bellatrix. She's a woman who's sole purpose on this earth is to please her insane master, which makes her a much more volatile character, I love it :P The desperation that seeps into her voice and actions when Voldemort threatens to take away her mark, oh lord help whoever he pits against her...

I also love the relationship developing between Sirius and Lily. Clearly something happened (something that's going to be addressed in the upcoming chapters? Hmn?) on the night that Lily's parents died, something that drew them closer together. This is apparent in the part where Sirius is taking food for Lily which I found incredibly sweet :D

I also liked how you're showing James mature, evident when he decides not to follow Alrek and Lily around ;) It's quite sad that the transfer isn't accepted straight away, but they're the marauders, they're so tight knit it's going to be hard for them to adjust to a new dorm mate.

But the thing I loved the most was your characterisation of Dumbledore, you have him down to a tee that it's hard to not think of what you're writing as something that JK wrote. Love it :D

Author's Response: Hiii! You're back you're back! I'm so sorry I again I wasn't able to leave another review today :(. I just wouldn't be able to focus the way I want to with all this family around making me crazy. Give me my apartment back! Eh hem. Sorry about that :P

Yes yes! What happened the night of Lily's parents' death and how Sirius is involved will absolutely be addressed. Dun dun dunn.

I thought it was fun trying to get James to resist following the group, too! They wouldn't accept someone new right away, silly Marauders! Though maybe there's more to him than meets the eye ;)

I'm so happy you like Dumbledore! Your compliments have just turned me to mush ♥ I don't even know how I'm able to type!

Thank you so much ♥

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