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Review:marauder5 says:
This was absolutely brilliant. I'm astonished by your fantastic writing every time I return to this story to find out what will happen. I can only dream of becoming as good a writer as you are someday.

The chapter was intriguing. I like the fact that you revealed why Snape and Pettigrew entered the Races, and I suppose you revealed why James did too. He wanted to defeat Lily before the final rounds, so that she wouldn't die. It seems like something that James would do, and I thought it was perfect.

I keep speculating about which two people it will come down to in the end. My latest theory is that it will Snape and James, and that Snape will sacrifice himself for Lily, so that she'll get to keep her husband. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out :)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much!!

You're correct, James wanted to get in there and throw Lily out of the races while he still had the chance. He is trying to keep her safe since she doesn't have the good sense and clarity to keep herself safe.

Snape and James would be a fun match for the end, but since they're on the same team it can't be them in the final round. The last round will be one person one one team, Victus, vs. one person on the opposite team, Mortuus.

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review!


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