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Review:missclaire17 says:
AW! :D
Actually, the thought that Carlotta was just using James for magic hadn't appeared in my mind at all either. I didn't even think of that possibility lol

I'm glad that Carlotta is going to stop punishing herself and finally let herself be happy; I see a lot of resemblance between James and Carlotta to Harry and Ginny. If Harry and Ginny can make it work out, I have full confidence in James and Carlotta to make it work.

I honestly just think that they're so cute together! They have their serious moments but then at the end, they're just so hilarious and so cute and just so perfect together that I'm so glad that James is so happy because Carlotta has finally stopped being stupid about thinking that she doesn't deserve to have happiness.

What I loved was that James still was so nervous about the game; it just shows to me that he is still so humble and I just love that about him. There are the players that are so confident like McLaggen that it just bugs you. There are also players that fake it till they make it, but then theres James, who doesn't hide that he is nervous but in the end, he just does what he does best at: which is play Quidditch and play it better than anyone else.

I love this chapter. I sincerely hope that things between James and Carlotta stay this good.
Next Friday's Quidditch match is going to be intense though.

Author's Response: It's not in Carlotta's nature to go around using people for her own ends, and the thought obviously didn't occur to James either so you're not alone in that! She HAS given in for the moment, but this isn't the end of her punishing herself, unfortunately. If it was then it would be a pretty quick fix! Certainly things are good in James' camp for now, though.

James knows that he has talent, but he doesn't expect to be good in every match. A lot of that attitude is down to his upbringing; in Harry and Ginny he has two parents who aren't going to let him get too big for his boots and take his talent for granted! And actually, because of that, he doesn't realise just how good he is and UNDERestimates his talent. But it's still better than thinking too much of himself.

The Bats match will indeed be intense! Hopefully that will be written and posted soon :) Thanks for reviewing!


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