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Review:megthechef43 says:
Jami,

Hello again. Another great chapter!! I think Bella was good in this chapter. She was mean and retched but it also showed that she is loyal to the Dark Lord and that the only think she wants is his praise. I can imagine the torture she was going through to bring nothing to her master.

Again in this chapter you showed the awesome bond that the Marauders had. It really helped me understand your point of view on Peter when I listened to your podcast "Casualities of War" it showed some insight to how you can write Peter before he betrayed his friends.

Lily cracks me up in this chapter when she hides her hangover. I love it! Hmm... I wonder what the truth is about the night that Lily's parents died. A little mystery.

I'm not sure about Alrek yet. I'll just have to read on to get a better feel of him.

Meg

Author's Response: Hi Meg!

I really enjoy writing Bella. She crops up in this pretty often, and it's always quite the experience when she does, haha!

I loved Lily hiding the hang over too! Just a bit sneaky, but totally worth not having to admit it :P

Alrek is definitely a character to keep your eye on :P

Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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